- Ease into intro and abstract better
- No full names of papers
- Present or past tense only
- Move placement of descriptions of vertical/horizontal approaches
- Move Theory chapter before method
- Figure captions should have a period
- Make sure figure numbers match in text
- All figures need to be mentioned in text
- More references if possible
- Bold parts of table to highlight it
- Figures != Tables
- Move 2.6 Research Gap Into Intro
- Make graphs fonts bigger
- 5.12
- 5.14
- 5.15
- 5.17