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[RM chapter 5] Language corrections. #10
[RM chapter 5] Language corrections. #10
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Signed-off-by: Michael Greaves <[email protected]>
@bfcohen, can you please review these language corrections, which I approved? You are our English and editing expert in residence! |
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Needs some more editing. I will complete the review and then reopen to do the edits. I think that will be easier.
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Needs some more edits. I have to reopen the file to do the edits.
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Cloud Infrastructure Software profile description | ||
Cloud Infrastructure node (host or server). :ref:`chapters/chapter02:profile extensions (specialisations)` | ||
may specify additional configurations. Workloads utilise profiles to describe the configuration of nodes on which they |
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replace utilise with use
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fixed in #17
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Needs more edits
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Overall looks OK. Needs some polishing.
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