Minor doc tweaks and corrections.

benzenwen · Mar 11, 2013 · bfbec0d · bfbec0d
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diff --git a/app.js b/app.js
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 //
-// mongolab-motion: Arduino motion detector logging to MongoLab
+// mongolab-motion: An Arduino motion sensor example that logs to
+// MongoLab's REST API and to an email address. 
 //
 
 //

diff --git a/package.json b/package.json
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 {
   "name" : "mongolab-motion",
   "version" : "0.1.0",
-  "description" : "An Arduino motion sensor example that logs to MongoLab's REST APIand to an email address.",
+  "description" : "An Arduino motion sensor example that logs to MongoLab's REST API and to an email address.",
   "main" : "app.js",
   "engines" : { 
       "node" : "0.8",

diff --git a/readme.md b/readme.md
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 ![Picture of the rig](mongolab-motion.jpg "The setup")
 
-A quick Node.js example of sending Arduino sensor data to a MongoDB
-database, hosted at MongoLab.  It uses the MongoLab REST API.  It
-sends results based on rules to email.  The hardware in the photo is
-an [Arduino UNO
+An Arduino motion sensor example that logs to MongoLab's REST API and
+to an email address.
+
+This simple Node.js example sends Arduino sensor data to a MongoDB
+database hosted at MongoLab.  It uses the MongoLab REST API.  It also
+sends results based on rules to email.  
+
+The hardware in the photo is an [Arduino UNO
 R3](http://arduino.cc/en/uploads/Main/ArduinoUno_R3_Front.jpg) and a
 [Parallax PIR motion
 sensor](http://www.parallax.com/tabid/768/productid/83/default.aspx)