Merge pull request #53 from buildkite/marketing-updates-to-landing-pages

Marketing updates to landing pages

app/views/homepage/_products.html.erb

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
         <article class="ProductCard">
           <div>
             <img alt="Pipelines graphic" class="ProductCard__img" src="<%= image_path('home/pipelines.png') %>" />
-            <p class="ProductCard__summary">Powerful CI/CD built to scale on your infrastructure</p>
+            <p class="ProductCard__summary">Powerful CI/CD built to scale on your choice of infrastructure</p>
           </div>
         </article>
       <a href="/docs/test-engine" class="Products__link">

app/views/landing_page_pipelines/_hero.html.erb

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
   <div class="Hero__content">
     <article class="Article">
       <h1>Buildkite Pipelines</h1>
-      <p>Create fast, secure, and reliable CI/CD with <em>Buildkite Pipelines</em> so you can quickly and confidently ship quality code. Scale out automated workflows with massive concurrency and flexible compute types on Buildkite Pipelines. Fine-tune each workflow to match your business needs. Buildkite provides the building blocks, docs, and extension points you'll need to build your dream CI/CD workflows. Let's get building! 🚀</p>
+      <p>Create fast, secure, and reliable CI/CD with <em>Buildkite Pipelines</em> so you can quickly and confidently ship quality code. Scale your builds with massive concurrency and flexible compute types, while fine-tuning each workflow to match your business needs. Let's get building! 🚀</p>
     </article>
     <div class="Hero__calls-to-action">
       <a href="tutorials/getting-started" class="Button Button--purple">

pages/package_registries.md

@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@ template: "landing_page"
 
 # Buildkite Package Registries
 
-Scale out asset management across any ecosystem with _Buildkite Package Registries_. Avoid the bottleneck of poorly managed and insecure dependencies.
+Scale out asset management for faster builds and deployments across any ecosystem with _Buildkite Package Registries_. Secure your supply chain and avoid the bottlenecks of poorly managed and insecure dependencies.
 
-Buildkite Package Registries allows you to:
+Package Registries allows you to:
 
 - Manage artifacts and packages from [Buildkite Pipelines](/docs/pipelines), as well as other CI/CD applications that require artifact management.
 
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Buildkite Package Registries allows you to:
 As well as storing a collection of packages, a registry also surfaces metadata or attributes associated with a package, such as the package's description, version, contents (files and directories), checksum details, distribution type, dependencies, and so on.
 
 > 📘
-> You can enable [Buildkite Package Registries](https://buildkite.com/packages) through the [**Organization Settings** page](/docs/package-registries/security/permissions#enabling-buildkite-packages).
+> Customers on legacy Buildkite plans can enable [Package Registries](https://buildkite.com/platform/package-registries) through the [**Organization Settings** page](/docs/package-registries/security/permissions#enabling-buildkite-packages).
 
 _Buildkite Package Registries_ was previously called _Buildkite Packages_.
 

pages/package_registries/security/permissions.md

@@ -30,6 +30,8 @@ As an organization administrator, you can access the [**Organization Settings**
 
 <h4 id="enabling-buildkite-packages">Enabling Buildkite Package Registries</h4>
 
+Customers on legacy Buildkite plans may need to enable Package Registries to enable this product.
+
 To do this:
 
 1. As a [Buildkite organization administrator](#manage-teams-and-permissions-organization-level-permissions), access the [**Organization Settings** page](https://buildkite.com/organizations/~/settings) by selecting **Settings** in the global navigation.

pages/platform.md

@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ The Buildkite Scale-Out Delivery Platform is an adaptable, composable, and scala
 
 The Buildkite platform documentation contains docs for _platform_-level features of Buildkite available across Buildkite [Pipelines](/docs/pipelines), [Test Engine](/docs/test-engine), as well as [Package Registries](/docs/package-registries). This area of the docs covers the following topics:
 
-- [Team management](/docs/team-management), with guidelines on how to manage your users and teams across the Buildkite platform for Pipelines, Test Engine and Package Registries.
+- [Team management](/docs/team-management), with guidelines on how to manage your users and teams across the Buildkite platform for Pipelines, Test Engine, and Package Registries.
 
-- [Buildkite CLI](/docs/cli), provides command line/terminal access to work with features across the Buildkite platform.
+- [Buildkite CLI](/docs/cli), which provides command line/terminal access to work with features across the Buildkite platform.
 
-- [Single sign-on (SSO)](/docs/integrations/sso) provides guidelines on how to protect access to your Buildkite organization using a supported third-party SSO provider.
+- [Single sign-on (SSO)](/docs/integrations/sso), with guidelines on how to protect access to your Buildkite organization using a supported third-party SSO provider.

pages/test_engine.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ template: "landing_page"
 
 # Buildkite Test Engine
 
-Scale out your testing across any framework with _Buildkite Test Engine_. Get more out of fewer tests with performance insights to speed up builds and isolate unreliable tests.
+Scale out your testing across any framework with _Buildkite Test Engine_. Speed up builds with real-time flaky test management and intelligent test splitting. Drive accountability and get more out of your existing CI compute with performance insights and analytics.
 
 Where [Buildkite Pipelines](/docs/pipelines) helps you automate your CI/CD pipelines, Test Engine helps you track and analyze the steps in these pipelines, by: