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with llm.

components/apps/Hero.vue

@@ -7,15 +7,14 @@
       <p class="text-lg mt-4 text-slate-600 max-w-xl">
         murchinroom produces apps for mobile, desktop, and web.
         <br /> <br />
-        We capture our ideas from the daily life of ourselves,
-        trying to find ways to improve our productivity and creativity
-        in a wide range of fields, including software development, photography,
-        book reading, and more.
+        We draw inspiration from our daily lives, aiming to enhance productivity
+        and creativity in various fields, including software development,
+        photography, book reading, and more.
         <br /> <br />
-        Combining the power of machine learning and software craftsmanship,
-        we distill our ideas into apps that are simple, elegant, and useful.
-        We enjoy the process of building them and have fun using them.
-        Hope they can inspire you too.
+        By blending the power of machine learning with software craftsmanship,
+        we transform our ideas into simple, elegant, and useful apps.
+        We enjoy building them and find great pleasure in using them ourselves.
+        We hope they inspire you too.
       </p>
     </div>
   </main>

components/landing/AboutUs.vue

@@ -66,24 +66,23 @@ const pricing = [
       </h2>
       <p class="text-lg mt-4 text-slate-600">
         murchinroom develops software in various domains, including
-        machine learning application, cloud computing infrastructure,
+        machine learning applications, cloud computing infrastructure,
         and more.
 
         <br /><br />
 
-        Treat computers as our friends, instead of tools,
-        we are especially interested in exploring the AI technologies,
-        researching the interaction between the art & machine learning,
-        and trying to build simple, elegant, and fun applications with them.
+        We treat computers as friends rather than tools. So,
+        we are particularly interested in exploring AI technologies,
+        researching the intersection of art and machine learning,
+        and building simple, elegant, and fun applications with these technologies.
 
-        Built on the top of proven open-source technologies,
-        most of our works on these fields
-        are open-source and free to the public.
+        Built on top of proven open-source technologies,
+        most of our work in these fields is open-source and free to the public.
 
         <br /><br />
 
-        Another focus of us is to build secure and reliable cloud infrastructures.
-        We figure out solutions for ourselves and willing to share them with customers.
+        Another focus of ours is to build secure and reliable cloud infrastructure.
+        We develop solutions for ourselves and are willing to share them with customers.
 
       </p>
     </div>

components/landing/Hero.vue

@@ -18,29 +18,31 @@
       </h1>
 
       <span class="font-thin text-slate-500">
-        a magic shop where the art meets AI.
+        a magic shop where art meets AI.
       </span>
       <br />
 
       <p class="text-lg mt-4 text-slate-600 max-w-xl">
-        Typically with CDFMLR serves as a reoccurring developer,
-        and the rest of the members are not fixed,
-        murchinroom fuse creativity with technology
+        Typically, with CDFMLR serving as a recurring developer
+        and the rest of the members being not fixed,
+        murchinroom fuses creativity with technology
         to explore the intersection
         between humans and machines
-        by produces open-source projects and apps
+        by producing open-source projects and apps
         that are fun in nature.
+
         The
         <a href="/projects#muvtuber" class="font-light">AI VTuber</a>
         and
         <a href="/projects#murecom" class="font-light">emotion-aware music recommendation</a>
-        are two of the most popular projects showing our philosophy and technology.
+        are two of our most popular projects,
+        showcasing our philosophy and technological prowess.
       </p>
       <p class="text-lg mt-4 text-slate-600 max-w-xl">
-        murchinroom excels in crafting innovation applications as much as
-        we specialize in delivering professional high-performance computing,
-        on-premises cloud computing and machine learning solutions
-        for businesses and individuals.
+        In addition to our innovations,
+        murchinroom also offers various professional software solutions,
+        including high-performance computing, on-premises cloud computing,
+        and machine learning services for businesses and individuals.
       </p>
       <div class="mt-6 flex flex-col sm:flex-row gap-3">
         <LandingLink href="#aboutus">

components/landing/Philosophy.vue

@@ -4,25 +4,21 @@ const features = [
     title: "Keep it simple, stupid",
     status: "software engineering",
     description:
-        "murchinroom builds software with the UNIX philosophy and complexity management in mind. " +
-        "We believe in the power of small, modular, and composable software components (or microservices).",
+        "murchinroom builds software with the UNIX philosophy and a focus on complexity management. We believe in the power of small, modular, and composable components, such as microservices.",
     icon: "bx:bxs-server",
   },
   {
     title: "Containerization and cloud native",
     status: "deployment & operations",
     description:
-        "murchinroom embraces the containerization technology and cloud native principles. " +
-        "We build, deploy, and scale our applications with Docker, Kubernetes, and other cloud services.",
+        "murchinroom embraces containerization technology and cloud-native principles. We build, deploy, and scale our applications using Docker, Kubernetes, and other cloud services.",
     icon: "bx:bxs-package",
   },
   {
     title: "On-premises machine learning",
     status: "cost-effective innovation",
     description:
-        "murchinroom rejects the idea of centralized large-scale machine learning models. " +
-        "We always look for ways to develop machine learning models just fit for the purpose, on-premises " +
-        "and with the least cost.",
+        "murchinroom rejects the idea of centralized large-scale machine learning models. Instead, we focus on developing models that are tailored to specific needs, deployed on-premises, and cost-effective.",
 
     icon: "bx:bxs-network-chart",
   },
@@ -36,10 +32,10 @@ const features = [
       <!--<span class="text-2xl text-slate-500"> for business</span>-->
     </h2>
     <p class="text-lg mt-4 text-slate-600">
-      Growing up with The Art of Unix Programming in hand,
-      murchinroom focuses on exploring the new AI / cloud technologies and
-      tries to apply them to our daily life, in a way that is really simple, elegant
-      and fun.
+      Growing up with "The Art of Unix Programming" in hand,
+      murchinroom focuses on exploring new AI and cloud technologies and
+      aims to integrate them into daily life in a way that is simple, elegant,
+      and, most importantly, fun.
     </p>
   </div>
 

components/landing/Technology.vue

@@ -8,18 +8,19 @@
       <!--<span class="text-2xl text-slate-500"> for business</span>-->
     </h2>
     <p class="text-lg mt-4 text-slate-600">
-      murchinroom builds software with a wide range of
+      murchinroom builds software using a broad range of
       modern open-source technologies and tools.
       <br /><br />
-      We implement backend services with Go, Python, etc.
-      and deploy them with Docker and Kubernetes.
+      We implement backend services with Go, Python, etc,
+      and deploying them with Docker and Kubernetes.
 
-      Redis and PostgreSQL are our favorite databases.
-      We also use MongoDB and MySQL in legacy projects and specific use cases.
+      Our preferred databases are Redis and PostgreSQL,
+      but we also utilize MongoDB and MySQL for legacy projects and specific use cases.
 
-      Our frontend applications are developed
-      with Vue.js for web, Swift for Apple platforms
-      and Flutter for cross-platform, etc.
+      For frontend development,
+      we create web applications with Vue.js,
+      Apple platform applications with Swift,
+      and cross-platform applications with Flutter.
     </p>
   </div>
 

components/projects/Hero.vue

@@ -7,15 +7,17 @@
       <p class="text-lg mt-4 text-slate-600 max-w-xl">
         murchinroom runs a number of projects prefixed with "mu".
         <br /> <br />
-        The original idea of these "mu" projects is to develop fun apps
-        about music. <wbr />
-        But as time goes by, we decided to expand the scope of "mu" projects
+        The original idea behind these "mu" projects
+        was to develop fun apps related to music. <wbr />
+
+        However, as time went on,
+        we decided to broaden the scope of the "mu" projects
         to include other art forms.
         <br /> <br />
         Now we officially explain "mu" as an abbreviation for
-        <del>"murchinroom universe"</del>
-        "machine & you", which indicates
-        the projects are exploring the intersection of machine learning (or AI)
+        <del>"murchinroom universe"</del> "machine & you",
+        which signifies that these projects are
+        exploring the intersection of machine learning (or AI)
         and human creativity (and emotion).
       </p>
     </div>

components/solutions/Guideline.vue

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ const features = [
     description:
       "Virtualizes all your hardware resources " +
         "into a single software-defined Hyper-Converged Infrastructure system. " +
-        "Manage your clusters with storage, networking, and compute at a integrated panel.",
+        "Manage your clusters with storage, networking, and compute at one integrated panel.",
     icon: "bx:bxs-server",
   },
   {
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ const features = [
     description:
         "Build and deploy your own LLM applications. " +
         "And enhance the performance by prompt engineering, fine tuning, " +
-        "retrieval-augmented generation and Multi-agent system.",
+        "retrieval-augmented generation and Multi-agent systems.",
     icon: "bx:bxs-bot",
   },
   // {
@@ -42,23 +42,23 @@ const features = [
     description:
         "Connect your on-premises & cloud infrastructure with a secure zero-trust network. " +
         "Manage all the devices in Virtual Private Networks. " +
-        "And keep data safe with end-to-end encryption.",
+        "And keep your data safe with end-to-end encryption.",
     icon: "bx:bxs-network-chart",
   },
   {
     title: "Kubernetes Management Platform",
     status: "alpha",
     description:
       "Deploy and manage your containerized applications with Kubernetes. " +
-        "Scale your applications with ease and keep them running with high availability.",
+        "Scale your services easily and keep them running with high availability.",
     icon: "bx:bxs-package",
   },
   // dev
   {
     title: "RESTful API Gateway for CLI Apps",
     status: "dev",
     description:
-        "Remotely call your CLI apps with a RESTful API. Share your scripts with others without exposing your server.",
+        "Remotely call your CLI apps with RESTful API. Share your system with others without exposing your server too much.",
     icon: "bx:bxs-terminal",
   },
   // {

components/solutions/Hero.vue

@@ -10,17 +10,16 @@
 
         <br /> <br />
 
-        Cloud computing have changed the way people build and deploy software.
-        Cloud paradigm made it easier to scale,
-        more agile in development, integration & deployment,
-        and (maybe) reducing the cost of infrastructure.
-        However it also introduced dependencies on third-party services.
+        Cloud computing has revolutionized how people build and deploy software.
+        This shift has made development processes more agile,
+        integration smoother, scaling simpler,
+        and potentially reduced (or increased) infrastructure costs.
+        However, it also introduces dependencies on third-party platforms.
 
         <br /> <br />
-
-        murchinroom stands with forks concerning their privacy and data ownership.
-        We provide on-premises cloud computing solutions that deploy
-        on your own servers, giving you full control over your data.
+        murchinroom understands the concerns about privacy and data ownership.
+        We provide on-premises cloud computing solutions that
+        can be deployed on your own servers, giving you full control over your data.
       </p>
     </div>
   </main>